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by messerschmitt

Comment by typologic:
great models for this challenge. lack of symmetry in their poses detract a bit for me.

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Comment by angela_packard:
photogenic twins i would say!

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Comment by digitalknight:
IMO a snapshot of two very pretty girls - with a large south facing window and some posing these two could bring you a ribbon

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Comment by talmy:
Look pretty even to me. Nice portrait. Only issue would be non-matching shoes, but you can't have everything.

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Comment by fotomann_forever:
This is a very well done snap-shot type photo. Exposure and focus are dead on. There are a few details that could have made it something better.

Shadows (particularly the deep shadow behind the legs) are distracting. It appears you used fill flash effectively, but you've left those shadows. A pcoket bounce may have lightened those shadows for you.

Perhaps the most annoying detail for me is the top "border" where the brick ends. My eyee is drawn to it.

I'd like to see the subjects more posed. A symetrical composition with them in very similar positions would have made a strong entry for this composition. With that, having black shoes vs. white shoes throws off the balance.

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Comment by GrayGhost:
Two/too cute, Two great expressions

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Comment by Jutilda:
Beautiful girls. I'd love to see more formal portraiture of them. This doesn't do them justice. WOW - their skin is gorgeous.

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Comment by datcat:
Oh this is great!

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Comment by arngrimur:
Very good work. The composition is right on.

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Comment by arngrimur:
Great post processing. I really like the graphical feel to the photo.