I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by HBunch:
Your product looks like the solar system. That has no bearing on anything, I just thought I'd mention that. lol. Lighting, angle and focus are great. I like the idea behind your photo too. With all this technology, we still hold onto the "primative" things. Overall great photo. Great job and good luck in the challenge.

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by GolferDDS:
I know how you feel! great shot.

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by floyd:
Excellent arrangement and framing. Very well conceived and executed.

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by johnspaar:
Good thought. Not strong visual though.

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by Kavey:
Interesting idea but the resulting image doesn't pack a punch with me... I'd almost be happier with just the pencil and the pad, it seems so real I want to reach out and touch it.
Kavey

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background8,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing8,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating8. Autool

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by risu81:
nice composition

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by Journey:
I admire the clarityof this image. The pencil is placed in a very realistic context (I say this because I just saw a number of images that left me wondering So what?). I find the overall composition a little weak: fine on the note pad and pencil but then the Palm and keyboard got tucked in there as well just because you wanted them for logical purposes that makes it hard for my eye to wonder around here (although I see some nice negative space triangles). 6 Journey

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by aguerra:
Composition:10, Lighting:10, Creative idea:10.
Nice composition, I like the light on the palm's left corner, and I also think a pencil will always be needed :)

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment by lmhr:
nice composition and true statement : )