ELLE
by jenarom

Comment by Ambrose007:
very nice photo

ELLE
by jenarom

Comment by thirteen_times:
This photo is almost flawless. Great shot - she's gorgeous. 9.

ELLE
by jenarom

Comment by RiderGal:
Pretty model... nice, natural lighting, plain backgournd, room for words. Nicely done, could definitely see this as a cover! Good luck with this!

ELLE
by jenarom

Comment by brumos:
humana, humana...... sorry, give me a sec to catch my breathe! Yes, finally a picture of a real model. perfect title too. skintones are immaculate and the focus displays perfectly on my monitor. have to give this a 10. Who is this fine looking woman?

ELLE
by jenarom

Comment by mindyparker:
Nice. though I would like to have seen a little more sky above the head.

I Am The Matrix
by jenarom

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*
Wow. Really nice. I like the effect a lot.
Lighting is everything here. I think that the projector provided enough light to effectively see the person, and not too much light, so that it still stays mysterious. I think however, that I would have prefered a more 'green' section to be on the face. Or at least a different pattern, so that there are not 2 really dark vertical stripes right in the middle. I realize that this helps the mystery feeling, but just seems too stripe-y. Maybe if the lettering were scattered instead?
The color seems really good. Green was a popular choice for this challenge. I feel like I'm in the green challenge all over again.
Focus and clarity seem really good on the person. I wonder how this would hold up if you could have gotten some of the lettering in focus as well. Maybe at least the larger lettering that is closest, and then have the smaller, farther away ones out of focus.
The angle and framing/cropping work well here. Simple but effective. Good crop, I don't feel that it's too close, or that there is too much neg. space. I think it's right on the money.
Really nice job.
~Heather~

I Am The Matrix
by jenarom

Comment by thatguy:
good idea, nice technique

I Am The Matrix
by jenarom

Comment by MattW:
good idea, the guys face is a little too dark though

I Am The Matrix
by jenarom

Comment by marbo:
Good effect. 7

I Am The Matrix
by jenarom

Comment by Dustin:
good job. nice pic.