Happy
by glad2badad

Comment by Chiqui:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

The first thing I noticed in this image was that the horse's face was cut off at the bottom. I know that the subject is the girl and not the horse but that is very disctracting. Perhaps a wider crop would have been better in this situation. Perhaps an even closer crop, just the girl's face would have worked too because this is such a nice expression.

I like the expression on the girl's face. The light is good and she is properly exposed without any blown highlights, specially on the tshirt where it would have been easy to do so, good job. I think the eyes could benefit from a little bit of dodging, just a tiny bit.

If you have any questions or comments about this critique, please feel free to PM me.

June

Grandpa the Toymaker ~ an OK Destination
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Comment by TG73:
neat

C'mon already - darn bubbles!
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Comment by Mrvile:
Wow, I just love the shadow. Nice effect.

C'mon already - darn bubbles!
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Comment by raymacey:
I don't know about the bubbles, but I do like the composition of this image. The glass and straw seem alone in the image, but then you see the head in the shadow. Nice.

Secret Voting Scam Revealed!!!
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Comment by blindjustice:
The hand of god? fantastic background.

THe best thing about this is the numbers on the calculator.
wait... what numbers?

C'mon already - darn bubbles!
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Comment by racha:
I don't get it.

C'mon already - darn bubbles!
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Comment by Tammer:
Creative shadow, "Peter Pan" :-)

C'mon already - darn bubbles!
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Comment by blakta2:
I like this. Very clear, nice lines.

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Comment by colyla:
LOL...too funny!!!

C'mon already - darn bubbles!
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Comment by Virus610:
Oh no..... My mother always yelled at me when I blew bubbles in my milk/chocolate milk, 'cause it would get so messy. Better hurry before your mother gets there!

I think that how you used what looks like chocolate milk, instead of white, was probably a good idea. The picture might have had too much white otherwise. The shadow of the face blowing bubbles brings the concept together, without obstructing the image with an actual face. I think more bubbles would be nicer, though. Chocolate milk has a lot of bubble-potential. 8.