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| 05/22/2006 01:33:31 PM |
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| 05/21/2006 10:41:29 PM |
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| 05/20/2006 01:01:33 PM |
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| 05/20/2006 09:47:52 AM |
Don't People Care?!by glad2badadComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
On a personal note, first, I totally agree. I love to fish (used to go a lot more than I do now) and I have grown up around sportsmen all my life. It galls me how some people use and abuse the very environment that gives them pleasure. Fishing line wads like this really disturb me because that stuff is so darn strong and dangerous to any animal that gets wrapped up in it. oh yea, you did throw it away didn't you? ;)
As a photograph, my first impression is that it technically well done and the composition does a good job at contrasting the line with the grass showing that the line is obviously somewhere it does not belong.
Technically, the colors are good and I think you have done a really good job of capturing the line without it "artifacting" or having weird patterns of light in it.
As a picture there isn't anything I can offer to really change about it. It makes a statement, and it makes it well. Perhaps for this challenge, a dead fish or something would've given it more impact, but I don't suppose that was possible.
Best to ya in future challenges!
karmat |
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| 05/20/2006 05:37:34 AM |
Planting Timeby glad2badadComment by aimeethetoo: I know some say that plants/flowers aren't still life but they definetly are in this composition. Great set up and perfect light & shadow. I'm glad the trowel is dirty too! :) |
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| 05/19/2006 11:37:42 PM |
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| 05/19/2006 06:10:06 PM |
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| 05/19/2006 04:29:56 PM |
Planting Timeby glad2badadComment by dahkota: This is actually very good - technically and compositionally. The only weak thing I can find is the lack of fill light on the right hand side, very slight blow out at the top. The colors are forcing me to use the word marvelous. Depth of field is excellent. Okay, I just pulled the image into photoshop. I'm wondering if your monitor displays darker than mine as I can see the line separating the wall and the ground. If you darkened levels very slightly so that disappears and run a slight curves adjustment, the parts of the still life really pop. Only added that as an insight - some people with dark or light monitors see differently. Anyway, I think, for a boring subject (most all still lifes are boring), you creating an exceptional image that I could see in a garden magazine. I like the lighting but feel a slight amount of fill on the right would help. If I was voting on this challenge, I would probably give this at least a 7 if not more. |
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| 05/19/2006 01:59:58 AM |
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| 05/19/2006 12:41:23 AM |
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