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| 04/07/2010 10:20:00 PM |
Training Courseby glad2badadComment by snaffles: Greetings from the Critique Club!
I have to agree with the peanut gallery on this one. The foremost cone isn't the one holding the most interest, it's the ones farther back where the crash/fall occurred. Frankly I'd like to see a few of the bg cones knocked over too. The bike is down, so seems likely that there is a cone or two knocked down as well, no?
Otherwise, the composition is quite decent with both thirds and lines leading back to the downed bike. But the very shallow dof means you have excellent focus where nothing is happening, and oof where all the interesting stuff is taking place.
Hope this helps, feel free to PM me with any questions,
Susan |
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| 04/07/2010 06:54:14 PM |
In the Gardenby glad2badadComment by mrbig65: ok,, i think this would be better in color,,, lots of flowers ,,,, in ok focus,,,6 |
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| 04/07/2010 03:31:18 PM |
Outside the frayby glad2badadComment by Ammie: I would have cropped more left and right but then again, I am not sure. The child left is distracting but I suppose you could not have cropped more. Good luck. |
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| 04/07/2010 11:26:43 AM |
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| 04/07/2010 09:29:05 AM |
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| 04/07/2010 01:51:01 AM |
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| 04/06/2010 11:48:30 PM |
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| 04/06/2010 01:38:35 PM |
Competitiveby glad2badadComment by dahlin: I'm just betting you might receive a bunch of comments about the background players. I do find their lack of interest in the event humorous, but that just adds to the image for me. In my top 10. |
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