Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by Cools:
I like the idea a lot...perhaps make the subject a bit larger in the frame.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by Makka:
Too dark for my liking sorry.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by mycelium:
I get the feeling that this would be a great picture if only it were focused! I feel like Grandma when she forgets to put on her glasses! The girl's pose is elegant, and the way she puts the weight on her legs is quite elegant. the friendly fellow behind her was a great way to maintain "decency" while also adding an erotic element. I can't tell way the greyness behind them is. What it makes me want to see is a backlit veil in front of these two, which would lend the sort of myserious air I think you're going for here while also maintaining technical precision.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by Marc923:
Focus would help.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by docpjv:
little too much fantacy.. little sharper and a little lighter would have made a nice difference.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by pixieland:
not as exciting as it could have been, but interesting.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by djcoffey:
interesting dreamy effect.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by catlord17:
Interesting...

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by DrAchoo:
Too obscure. If you are going for low contrast, I'd at least have it in focus.

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment by vtruan:
to dark, out of focus, and ..... maybe I just missed your point