Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by lkn4truth:
On a scale of 0-2 in five different categories: Image quality - 1. Composition - .5. Lighting - 1. Post Processing - 1. Choice of Subject - 1.5. TOTAL SCORE - 5

Mammaw
by tjbel05

Comment by Brad:
So glad to see this as your best of submission, as I know how much it means to you (but forgot who's it is..)
This is truly a very fine photograph and character study - fine choice for b&w!

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by lefteyewilly:
not quite enough background motion blur for me.

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by malina:
I like how you froze her expresion and movement- too bad all the lines in the background are horizontal- hence the panning is less visible. And maybe a tighter crop would help- I feel like there is too much space on the left and above her head.

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by pesque:
DNMC

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by Hipychik:
Not really any motion in the background, but I like the shot.

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by Retroesque:
Nice work on the panning. I think the masks on the wall are distracting I'd like to have seen it as a tighter crop.

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by Citadel:
Not really getting a feeling of panning in this shot. Sorry.

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by Qiki:
Maybe a little faster pan or slower shutter speed would have helped this by blurring the (fairly uninteresting) background a touch more. Also, I'd love to have seen the actual vault itself. That could have looked really cool.

Vault Run
by tjbel05

Comment by dwterry:
There's just not a lot of background blur on this image. To make a truly succesful "motion panning shot", you need to run the shutter at a much slower speed than you would normally use and then, as accurately as possible, follow your subject with the camera (that much you appear to have done well, you just needed a slower shutter speed to blur the background).