Triangle 2
by totaldis

Comment by AlanBes:
Metallic colours come through great - but some noise/dirt/marks/dust?

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by Evaan:
Very sharp, well lit and nice highlights on the scissors.

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by Zap228:
great picture. good lighting too. 8

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by nsmith:
Good concept, would have been better with a type of paper other than notebook, say a colored bond

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by ubermoose:
You capture the essence of the game. Simple, yet poignant.

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by mightythor:
This is a little plain, but your idea is a pretty good one.

Withered and Weathered
by totaldis

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

This is a very interesting building. I think that the scene you captured here is lovely despite being old and broken.
Your focus and clarity are really nice. I like the detail you show us in the panels and roof.
I think I have to agree with most of the commenters and say that I don't prefer the black 'frame' on the top and bottom. Is this the fence you were talking about? I think that instead of the black, I would prefer to see some more of that nice blue sky. I think it would compliment the rusty red nicely, but as is, we can't really see much of it.
I like the barrel in the lower left corner. I think that adds a bit of something to look at without making it too busy.
Lighting is simply wonderful. It looks like it was a very beautiful day to be taking photos. There is only one shadow from the roof to the left that is really noticable and it's not a distraction in my opinion.
Overall I like this image a lot (minus the black top and bottom). ~Heather~

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by hopnjohn:
Nice lighting and focus.

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by gattamarta:
nice concept, but maybe the picture is too empty

Infinite Loop
by totaldis

Comment by love:
I am coming back to comment and bumping up to a 9 just because