Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by rightsaidfred:
u should straighten your horizon line

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by f-32:
Maybe there's something I'm not seeing... WHAT is heroic about a child and a toddler? I don't see any clues here. snow? water? rocks? Afraid I don't see anything indicating these are heros.

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by moosetrax:
Would have used differnet cropping or positioning of the kids, since the kids are the freinds
but your eyes get drawn to the water.

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by Cutter:
Crooked horizon draws me away from the subjects. It looks exceptionally cold there.

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by alanfreed:
Why the apostrophe? AAAAAAHHH! (End of grammar rant :)

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by sofap:
family photos are great for home and family

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by moodville:
First thing I noticed was the crooked horizon. It would have been better to crop out that completely. Additionally the girls' legs are cropped out, which seems odd considering there is a lot of negative space around them. Crouching down to that you were on their level and getting either a closer up view of the girls or else getting in their entire bodies would have helped.

Everyday Hero's
by ryany_13

Comment by bobgaither:
your horizon is tilted might want to correct that and maybe get all you subjects in frame for you have cut off their legs. good photograph.

Slippery For Motercycles
by ryany_13

Comment by ryany_13:
I did'nt realize I made a spelling error in the title, oh well. thanks for all of the helpful comments. I'm new at this and i'll take all of the constructive critisism i can get

Slippery For Motercycles
by ryany_13

Comment by mycelium:
might have suggested playing up the fact that the sign looks very facelike, and avoid the repetition of the sign text in the image title.