Together
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Comment by Younger:
Lovely

Together
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Comment by kiwiness:
Lovely shot, I do like this.

Together
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Comment by LalliSig:
Like this heaps better than the shots you had on keppni.is where you blew out all hightlights, this is pretty nice. Like the light over the older girls shoulder to give her hairlight but it´s just a tad too bright and almost blows out the hightlights on her chee, I would turn down the bowens light about 1/2 a stop or even a full stop and see if that doesn´t work better. Anyway, nice portraits and says more about their character than most shots in this challenge so it got a 7 from me.

piano lesson
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Comment by chugginrail:
cool picture........nice use of colors........(8)

Together
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Comment by Beetle:
Beautiful job! I love the pose, the lighting, the composition. 9

Together
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Comment by elru21:
A very nice moment between them. The composition really enhances the closeness. It looks like your main light is too low. The light seems to come from slightly below them. The light on the mother's back and cheek is a little too harsh.

Together
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Comment by hotpasta:
Lovely...Well done, hope you do well with this...

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Comment by nomad469:
this could have been very nice... a couple of things dont work for me ...
the lighting seems to be flat really really needs to boost the contrast and drop the exposure a tad.

you have a copystand type lighting happening here. play with moving the main light a little more to center

Together
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Comment by Anastasia:
lovely image

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Comment by oOWonderBreadOo:
I love the engaging expressions on their faces and the soft colors! I only wish the outfits were more cohesive 8