Togetherby
sigrun_thComment by Artyste: Hello, and greetings from the Critique Club. What follows is my best attempt to Critique this photo from a DPC voter's point of view. I'll do my best, but please excuse any comments that may be unintentionally rude or insulting.
Initial Thoughts
What a comfortable and intimate moment that is very well expressed.
Composition/Content
I like the composition, only I think it would have been slightly stronger had you put more emphasis on the adult model's head and moved the shot slightly more in an upper-right angle, or even just more up, putting the child's chin more towards the bottom of the frame. Of course, that's just a thought, but it seems there is too much centering with the child, making the "mother" figure less important. The models, however, are very relaxed and exude their love for each other, while giving us an intensity in their looks.
Background
A nice, neutral background, helping put the emphasis on the models
Camera Work/Technical
My only concern is in the rather flat lighting. There's not enough depth to this image I feel. The shadows are too light, and some hot-spots distract.
Digital Processing
No information given here, but some work with contrast and deeping the color and skin tones would have helped immensely.
Fits the Challenge
No problems here.
My Opinion of the Photo
A strong emotional photo with a few issues that I mentioned. It's a lovely family moment, but for DPC, it lacks that punch.
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