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magneticComment by Artan: I can general observation.
1. If you crop the image just below his feet and position him so that he is in the bottom left corner (rule of thirds), this realy lift the shot.
2. I find the image too bright, for me poverty is encapsulated by dark and moody lighting. I would have tried to use more contrast to try and emulate this.
3. The guy seems to have a great face; it would have been great to have more of that in the frame. This would a better illustration of grit and hardship.
4. As a general observation and you are not alone in this. I do not necessarily associate a musician busking, with poverty, but maybe that is just me.