Taking Note
by codauber

Comment by Jutilda:
I like the movement and the angle of the shot. The light bouncing off of the black keys along with the hand movement makes for a nicely done shot.

Taking Note
by codauber

Comment by BobsterLobster:
If I were playing live music and a photographer was that close, I'd tell them to get lost. The light has given unappealing shadows on the wood from the keys. The wood isn't flattered by the quality of the light. The shot doesn't give much of a sense of mood or atmosphere, a good music shot reflects the quality of the music being performed.

Taking Note
by codauber

Comment by theSaj:
interesting.....not sure how i feel on this...but intriguing none-the-less

Taking Note
by codauber

Comment by mystical_princess:
this is too blurred, wish the key board was more in focus to accent the effect more

Taking Note
by codauber

Comment by digidori:
This is the shot I wanted to make. I would love to know how you set up your camera to get the motion.

1968
by codauber

Comment by blondmcfly:
Probably would have been better in black and white.

1968
by codauber

Comment by macrothing:
5 - Met the Challenge (both in the respect that most of these items could go IN a time capsule, and also the respect of a photo of this could go in a time capsule to depict the era for future generations). Criticism; I think that if you had less (even none) typewriter (as it is too disproportionate to the other items), and more attention paid to the arrangement/composition of the items you have, it would have made this a better photograph in my opinion. Although I am a fan of unusual angles, I think you have lost detail on a lot of your items with the angle you have chosen. I tried to discern '....space odyssey' and can't make out if it is a record or what, so just detail paid to such things, via the composition/arrangement, would have made this a better shot in my opinion. There are quite a few things I can't decipher, but in general it looks like you have gone to a lot of effort to ensure all items are specific and authentic to your year. The colors are a little 'haphazard', but again, in my opinion, if you had given more attention to arrangement etc, it would have made a difference for that aspect as well. More clarity is also required, especially seeing as the most dominant item (the typewriter) is out of focus, in my opinion, the items looked at 'beyond that', seem 'out' as well.

1968
by codauber

Comment by pinotken:
Good stuff, i'd change the light/colour to feel less modern

1968
by codauber

Comment by TheresaA:
Nice picture. I like the way I was draw into the family photo. Good Luck

1968
by codauber

Comment by mpeters:
cool, a prop or two less might have increased the pictures impact, but still very nice