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by mariegbeve

Comment by downtherabbithole:
very wrong depth of feild, look like taken with camera phone...

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by mariegbeve

Comment by Rankles:
I can't rate this high as it seems too stage and quite poorly shot. The girl still has red eye...

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by mariegbeve

Comment by Skip:
i can appreciate the take on the challenge, but the quality of the image is too low to justify scoring it high.

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by mariegbeve

Comment by tyt2000:
The red eye ruins the photo. Also, you'll need to adjust the levels so the colors aren't washed out. Try an external flash, or another source of light coming from another direction.

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by mariegbeve

Comment by rkligman:
Great subject but no contrast and she has red eye

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by mariegbeve

Comment by snackwells:
Model is appropriate. There are several factors which make this photograph unacceptable.

- Contrast. Lack thereof. This shot could have used a nice boost in contrast.
- Framing. Could have cropped off the distracting white at the lower right corner and upper right corner, and the female could have been shot in front of a more interesting backdrop. A slight rotation clockwise could have improved this.
- Red eye. Under the basic editing rules, this is problematic. I think instead of shooting her face on, a different angle would have been more compelling and eliminated the red eye, to boot.
- Detail. Focus is soft and the resolving capability of the camera is rather dismal. Perhaps a tighter shot would have brough out more details which was lost with this particular composition.

Given these considerations I can't rate this very highly, sorry.

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by mariegbeve

Comment by AutumnCat:
Good concept. However, the photo is very dark & flat - could use more contrast and light.
Also, the radiator (?) and red eye could use some editing.

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Comment by MrYu:
Oh, could be such a nice photo, but the quality is just nonexistent...

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Comment by Shadowrain:
Indeed he does have it. Your camera must have quite a fast shutter. (5)

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by mariegbeve

Comment by cghubbell:
Overexposure, motion blur, focus problems. This shot doesn't lend itself well to b/w because therer is very little contrast between design elements.