Pat - Ghoulunatics
by grandmarginal

Comment by Jinjit:
The kind of photo I would expect to find in the rock magazines.
Focused and contrasted well.
I would burn that little hot spot on the right side, behind the player though. It's a bit distracting.
Great work!

Lolo - Second shoot
by grandmarginal

Comment by Jinjit:
Very few women look good in blue tones. She looks great IMO!
I don't like the high contrast of the background. I would like the blues to blend softer into the white BG but other then thatI really like this one. And especially I like the stripe of light on her belly.

Lolo dans la lune
by grandmarginal

Comment by SnapperL:
She is wonderfully gorgeous. I agree that perhaps the lips could be desaturated just a tad. It somewhat draws away from the rest of the photo.

Lolo dans la lune
by grandmarginal

Comment by sher:
this is quite beautiful. i love how the tone sets the mood and her pose looks very natural. the only thing i would do a bit differently is lower the saturation on her lips a bit. it does draw my eyes to her face but the color seems just a bit too hot.

Lolo dans la lune
by grandmarginal

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Yes, shame about the slight overexposure, but I think the mood of this shot is outstanding. I like the overal composition. The hand is a little awkward but I don't notice this at first. I like the red lipstick, personally.

Lolo dans la lune
by grandmarginal

Comment by blindjustice:
shading the lips might not be necessary here. It displays a bit of portraiture brilliance, but the expression, the pose the grabbing of the leg could probably be improved upon a bit.

Lolo dans la lune
by grandmarginal

Comment by rscorp:
I think this is an improvement. The color effect is nice, kind of like a fine art style photo. The black and white was fine too in my opinion. The best thing I think you did is crop out her feet, which had been made to look way too large with the wide angle lens. Without that distraction now, the viewer is left to focus right on her face and hair. Some areas might yet be a little hot, but it's not bad at all. Good editing job!

grandmarginal
by grandmarginal

Comment by Joey Lawrence:
Haha, this is so cool! It looks like an ink sketch... What photoshop filters did you use? Find edges?
The cartoony eyes are a result of liquify, right? Good work!

Humour is in the seat of the beholder...
by grandmarginal

Comment by MadMordegon:
lol thats great

Humour is in the seat of the beholder...
by grandmarginal

Comment by connie:
This image still makes me laugh when I see it.... This should of placed higher!