A cloudy day won't keep Happiness away.
by ssodell

Comment by NathanWert:
Love the smile, but it appears like the focal point was in front of her and not on her face.

A cloudy day won't keep Happiness away.
by ssodell

Comment by mpemberton:
A lovely genuine smile is captured here, reflecting inner happiness. A few changes I would make are in: The focus seems a little out, reflection for her skin tones seems over stated, slight halo on upper right part of head and upper left arm, her left. I bet her eyes are beautiful a closer shot or cropping, on her right the rail is stealing the focus from her smile. A different Jacket may of worked better here. 6

Boat
by ssodell

Comment by Barry:
Which boat are we taking about....? Is it the one at the bottom right whose mast is the only thing we see? If it is the one in the middle of the water. The mast is a distraction..............................................

Boat
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Comment by mcismowski:
Great visual contrast between this boat and the larger ones in the background.

Boat
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Comment by Simonkasprzak:
snapshot 1

Boat
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Comment by popdeepop:
Is the small boat the one?

Boat
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Comment by mysticred:
Brown line is distracting

Boat
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Comment by itsrazzi:
not minimalism

Boat
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Comment by alternarule:
That line in the foreground is very awkward. Like how there is this one small ship backed by these big yaughts in the back

Boat
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Comment by IanChristie:
The boats in the back ground appear to be a bit too sharp, but their size helps the eye locate the subject.