we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by Prof_Fate:
If i had a sub... On to your pic...lots of issues to work on. Lighting: you need something morethan the direct flash from the camera. the front fender is over exposed and hte background shows, the light falls off on the carpet ....try a table with a tshirt or sheet, or posterboard works well. it can be curved up the back and be a 'floor 'and a wall. The car hood is very noisy. high iso setting (due to low light) will do this. Check out a program (free) called Neat Image. Lastly, the front wheel is not in focus. As light drops off you openteh aperture more (to a lower number) and that reduces DOF. So more light will allow a smaller aperture and more DOF...lighting: start there.

we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by sblair2146:
This looks out of focus.

we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by rkligman:
Needs better focus. The light would have been better on top of the car.

we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by paynekj:
I think the carpet and curtains are a bit distracting. Try it again on a large sheet of paper that goes under the model, then goes up the wall behind - but not folded.

we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by MrYu:
not creative, out of focus and awful light.

we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by deapee:
hrmm...Your focus seems a bit off here. The lighting is a bit harsh on the front left quarter panel. Possibly a different background and some better lighting would have done you more justice such as in a parking lot with some other cars out of focus in the background.

we all live in a yellow lamborghini
by yoman

Comment by mycelium:
nice model

the lucky 2 dollards circle
by yoman

Comment by kymmers:
where did you get green toonies?

the lucky 2 dollards circle
by yoman

Comment by Mark:
seems a bit OOF

the lucky 2 dollards circle
by yoman

Comment by alien2thisworld:
I like the contrast between the black background and the coins here, though i wonder if a little softer light would light them more evenly to eliminate the glare on some, and the darkness on others. Nice composition