Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by Ombra_foto:
LOL.... Love the bite...

Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by neophyte:
I love the idea, Needs to be better focus to give this the panache it deserves.

Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by samanwar:
Good job, 9

Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by gurlwithapen:
clever

Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by GolferDDS:
Very creative and original idea. I would like to see it a little sharper. Sell it to a bagel shop.

Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by Jutilda:
Looks just like a poster! Really imaginative. Hope you had some cream cheese standing by!! 8

Bagelicious
by jrjr

Comment by joycobb:
Yum! Now I'm hungry. Creative and nice matching frame.

My Favorite Christmas Lights
by jrjr

Comment by android9:
I agree with the below comments. The eye doesn't rest on any one focal point. I think if the bottles were in sharper focus, and perhaps if their positioning had be changed a little this would have popped. I like the idea, and there's definitely a festive atmosphere evoked here. I think from an emotive standpoint, there's good storytelling, if only just a snapshot of the season's festivities, and the pun itself is clearly defined.

Message edited by author 2005-12-26 20:40:01.

My Favorite Christmas Lights
by jrjr

Comment by BrennanOB:
I think you cropped a bit too close to the bottom of the frame, and that the botles bleed into the backround because of two factors, the lighting is too universal, a flash or spot picking them ou would have popped them forward; and the focus is too soft if the bottles were crisper they would have seperated more strongly from the BG which is nicely fuzzy.

The strand of lights woven through the bottle isn't cutting it, too subtle, either bigger lights or brighter lights (longer exposure and don't light the tree for part of the time?) could help, otherwise just loose the strand.

My Favorite Christmas Lights
by jrjr

Comment by ragamuffingirl:
I think you should reduce the brightness of the background, and maybe crop a little closer the that Christmas ball.