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KonadorComment by Neuferland: Greetings from the Critique Club.
Oy, why me? LOL! I love this shot, I was trying to figure out during the challenge how you caught all those different colored fireworks!
Now that I see how it was done it makes much better sense.
Now to critique. It's perfect of course! ;) Okay, not really, there is one little thing that bothers me a bit, it's off balance or appears to be off balance. The cropping on the right has the lights running out of the shot while on the left there is black space, a slightly tighter crop on the left would balance this out for me. Also the white lights are a bit distracting but you couldn't very well ask them to turn them off, could you? I just took my ruler out and the center is just about in the center of the shot but because of that space on the left it still looks off to me.
The colors are fantastic and the dots along the lines are I'm assuming where the camera was making it's adjustments while zooming and really add to the shot. The border is perfect for this shot, the black edge holding it all in.
You really should do a "How did they do that" tutorial on this one, it's a great effect overall!
Hope this helps!
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!