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| 02/16/2006 02:51:20 PM |
Fear Of Your Own Shadowby JudiComment by cresus: Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition:
The subject's placement in the shot is very good. I would've preferred the body of the shadow to be a little more prominent since it's cut off on the side but it works well. Everything leads my eye into the shot and the shadow's arm leads me to you so that worked out very well.
Camera Work:
The lighting is very even and the choice of the wood grain background works out very well. One thing I'm distracted by is the fact that I can see the grain through your body. It does make it look dreamy but I would've liked to see you more solid. This could've been accomplished with 2 flash pulses instead of a well lit long exposure.
Post-processing:
Contrast and brightness look good and the B&W looks very nice. The burning of the shadow looks a little blotchy though. Some areas are almost completely black while others are dark grey.
Overall I like this shot. The emotion displayed on your face really interests me in the shot so you did what you were trying to do. My main comments for improving the shot (and I could easily be wrong) could've been achieved by strobing a flash so that you weren't so transparent. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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| 02/16/2006 12:13:31 PM |
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| 02/16/2006 09:48:06 AM |
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| 02/16/2006 08:18:56 AM |
Cupids Aimby JudiComment by sherpet: Now this is cute, real cute..... Well done..... A "WOW" from me..... |
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| 02/15/2006 11:15:14 PM |
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| 02/15/2006 08:21:54 PM |
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| 02/15/2006 04:34:08 PM |
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| 02/15/2006 01:50:55 PM |
Cupids Aimby JudiComment by SJCarter: Well done! Your kid deserves extra candy for this. Of course, years from now, he'll never forgive you. ROFL Great job! |
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