The Bridge
by LeeD

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Surely has that fairy tale look you are going for, but seems like the tire swing is out of place in the shot for that kind of image. I would also include all or none of that bridge - the scene is very frenetic / chaotic.

My brutally honest two cents. :)

edited to add: If you were just looking for feedback about the edits - this effect was a good choice for what I think you were going for. I just picked at the content & composition. :)

Message edited by author 2005-09-26 14:30:41.

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by Jutilda:
Greetings from the Critique Club!!

I think this has definite potential! The orangey red tones of the track leading into the orangey pink sky give a sense of continuity. The perspective is good and the leading line sense of it does exactly what the title denotes. I wish that the clarity was a bit sharper, which is hard to attain with limited lighting. Maybe the use of the unsharp mask could help do this. The misty background is an appealing aspect to the shot and lends itself to an ethereal feel to it. The white touch of cloud in the sky at the top of the shot in the background is a nice added touch. There isn't alot of contrast but that is to be expected with the time of day and the look I think you were going for. Overall a nice image that might use a touch of tweaking here and there to really make it a prize winner.. Take care, Judy

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by Gauti:
as many have said: the golden rails are wonderful

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by owen:
Very nice shot.

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by AzCKelly:
Neat picture. Love how the lines are highlighted. I've never seen anything like this. The line at the top is somewhat distracting but the color is incredible.

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by dsidwell:
The golden rails are lovely, and I like the clean simplicity in this photo. 9

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by angflener:
The sunset reflecting on the tracks looks awesome.

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by Steveinnz:
Nice capture, I think I would have cropped out the white streak on the top

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by CLarson557:
Very nice. Like the mist and the colors.

Into the Sun
by LeeD

Comment by mycelium:
the glow is ephemeral. very nice work.