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Comment by CassieDoodle:
this is a very nice image! you should be proud to have it in your portfolio.

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Comment by DrKDB:
I like this a lot. I wonder if you could work on the eyes- increase the catch light in her eyes would also focus on the face. It's a great photo.

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Comment by FrostyPaws:
Great shot.Beautiful light in this.

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Comment by Nusbaum:

Originally posted by Jac: Great shot. Exposure is spot on and comp is good. That darn bra strap though attracts my view...grr

Ya... Bra straps and those stretchy hair bands that get left of wrists... two things that ALWAYS come back to bite me!

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Comment by one2one:
Great shot. Exposure is spot on and comp is good. That darn bra strap though attracts my view...grr

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Comment by Nusbaum:

Originally posted by Jedusi: Really nice shot - only nitpick for me is the white bra strap - but that might just be personal taste :) Attractive model, lovely warm gentle lighting.

No, it's just not personal taste. I HATE bra straps and the current trend to layer up a bra and three undershirts with all the various straps just makes me nuts.

I should have requested that she just loose the bra, but it was early in the session and her boyfriend was 10ft away watching. Later in the session I very politely asked that she remove the bra and promised not to exploit the lack of it in any fashion.

I did try to retouch the strap out, but I didn't get it as clean as I wanted so left it in for now.

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Comment by Jedusi:
Really nice shot - only nitpick for me is the white bra strap - but that might just be personal taste :)

Attractive model, lovely warm gentle lighting.

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Comment by Bernard_Marx:
Beautiful! I think a slight 3/4 vignette (none top right) would work well here - it would shift focus to here face a bit more.

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Comment by Bernard_Marx:
This is wonderful light David - so vibrant and rich!

2008.06.21 Danielle
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Comment by Jutilda:
Great lighting. The only thing that doesn't "go" for me are the perfectly manicured nails. They kind of stand out but that's just me. She's really beautiful.