A Night Call
by Savir

Comment by mocabela:
This could be made much more appealing with some slight tweaking. A bit of sharpening, some toying with levels to give it more contrast and maybe a bit of noise, and perhaps conversion to black and white - I think these things would give the photograph more interest and a healthy dose of mood. The composition is nice, and the framing is unique.

A Night Call
by Savir

Comment by Bran-O-Rama:
Harsh lighting and being out of focus hurts this photo.

A Night Call
by Savir

Comment by shogy:
Too much top glare for me. But if you were to crop it you would lose the frame effect. Next time.

A Night Call
by Savir

Comment by davehuge:
Like the photo but all seems a bit blurred. Nice idea.

A Night Call
by Savir

Comment by dustin03:
I love this type of shots...simple, street, and almost abtract. Also, I love shots that have a alot of neg.white space....It's a wonderful comp....Hmm, I see the framing, little bit, needs more to fit the challenge...Not, saying it dosn't..just needs more...However, with this street shot. I don't think framing is nessassary anyway....ummm, with this shot, I see it needs more sharpening and the exposer seems overexposed....If I were you, I would simply re-shoot this place better focus and lighting adjustments, convert it to b/w...and have it for your portfolio. Not to sure about the (model) here..too..However, it is a street shot..you get what they give you...:) Umm, I would love to see a re-shoot....just an artistic way of say I do love this comp. Good luck.

Freedom from the Chains
by Savir

Comment by phoensoul:
The candle is so bright (blown highlights) that the rest of the image was underexposed, and I really have no idea what I'm looking at here. It looks like one of my old band medals and some watch bands? You might try using a soft fill light to bring up the level of the rest of the image to make it closer to the brightness of the candle, then underexpose the entire thing to get it back down to the darkness that you want it. You could also crop down the top a bit, that grey space isn't doing anything for the image.

Freedom from the Chains
by Savir

Comment by photom:
You have some nice colors that work well together, but the composition and focus take away from the image. It's really hard to see what you are trying to tell me.

Freedom from the Chains
by Savir

Comment by Node:
Very little is in focus or distinguishable. makes it hard to tell what you are trying to convey.

Freedom from the Chains
by Savir

Comment by claudia26:
too blurry light and the interesting left half is too obscure