Jurassic Dream
by cloudsme

Comment by chipuc:
Nice idea, unfortunately quite dezorganized.

Don't Call Me Yellow
by cloudsme

Comment by CNovack:
The hue of the yellows are vivid, bold, and really pop visually off of the black background. Lighting on the model is very good illuminating her while keeping good skin tones. This is a good 'portrait' shot but I think there are some elements that can be added to improve the composition and help it better match the (heavyweight or lightweight) title (sorry, could not stop myself from making a boxing reference) you have bestowed upon it. First off, I think she should be poised with her gloved fists up like she is about to spar with someone. This will show action and be better suited to match the title of the composition. I know that would remove her hand from her chest but she need not bare her breast at all - all she would have to do is keep her head in the same position and turn her back slightly more to us. Next the model's facial expression should look like she is ready to fight (them's fighting words mister) with the eyes narrowed in irritation/anger and the lips tightly pursed. Her expression in the photo as it is now has neither.

Don't Call Me Yellow
by cloudsme

Comment by saracat:
Would have been better with a top on her. I'm not against showing some skin, but this just seems unneccessary. It wouldn't lose any impact (tee hee) if she wore a top.
It's a fine photo, but the not wearing a top just throws it off for me.

Here I Am
by cloudsme

Comment by scarbrd:
cute! I would have removed some of the red from the skin tones

Don't Call Me Yellow
by cloudsme

Comment by yanko:
Striking in more ways then one. lol. Gets an 8 in the first go around.

Don't Call Me Yellow
by cloudsme

Comment by hotpasta:
great lighting and well executed shot...would have loved it if she was looking at us with that expression, but nice job

Don't Call Me Yellow
by cloudsme

Comment by Qwest30:
Great photo if the breast wasn't squished into a cube, the squishing is distracting. :(

Don't Call Me Yellow
by cloudsme

Comment by angela_packard:
wow...buff chicky!!! 10

"A Boy and His Dog" by Harlan Jay Ellison
by cloudsme

Comment by elru21:
Very cute. I wish there were a little more room on the right, around the boy's eye, and on the bottom. He seems just a little too close to the edge of the frame.

"A Boy and His Dog" by Harlan Jay Ellison
by cloudsme

Comment by Nyck:
love sweet!he he