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redpandaComment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Certainly is a nice burst of color. Nice detail.
Composition:
Lacks a little punch. Perhaps the blue area shoudn't be at the center of the photo, but off center (Rule of Thirds).
Subject:
Subject is clear and nicely presented.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Colour: Nice color, and this was essential for this challenge.
Focus: Seems a bit soft to me, but this may be more of a post-process thing than an in-camera issue.
To grow its vote?:
Composition.. push the Rule of Thirds HARD... voters at DPC love the Thirds compositions.
Summary:
Overall, nice presentation. You were on the right track here and it fit the Challenge well.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy