Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by MacDonald:
this is a great photo --- there is nothing I could suggest to make it better.... knocking off 1 point because, IMO, it doesn't show any kind of an environment.

Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by chabes:
nice crisp picture. Environmental? Not really what I think of. Still gets u a four.

Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by scarbrd:
nice expression, I see where you're going with this, but it does need an environment.

Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by Jutilda:
This is hilarious. Love his expression. The high key works great. You may have a winner on your hands. 10

Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by ShutterPug:
love the expression - priceless!

Blank Canvas - the mind of the young
by Hrutsen

Comment by whiteroom:
oh how sweet! this better ribbon

Green Light
by Hrutsen

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot, but lacks focus. I checked your portfolio .. all of your higher scoring shots have that focus point.

Composition:
It pays to rotate .. off centred does not actually mean crooked. You can tell this by the angle that the lamppost is on.

Subject:
This is a good night time shot ... one i dream of being able to achieve one day myself. it defiantely meets the challenge.

Technical (Colour and light):
Well lit amd well done for an evening shoot.

To grow its vote?:
There needs to be a true focus point, fine details such as straightening need attention for all shots.

Summary:
Good addition to the portfolio. You have also recieved some valuable comments from voters which you should note.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Message edited by author 2006-02-12 20:27:07.

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by stare_at_the_sun:
Wpw...talk about underrated... I love this photo and gave it one of the 10's. I fully expected this to be in the top 10. Keep up the good work man... I added you to my fav photog list so I can keep tabs on you. Later...

Leaving the party
by Hrutsen

Comment by mycelium:
great posing and lighting - great image. I really appreciate the attention to detail.

Green Light
by Hrutsen

Comment by Evaan:
Like the perspective and the foreground area. Well lit.