Teacher's pet?
by sidpixel

Comment by aznym:
I have seen similar ideas in the challenge but I don't think any of the others come even close this this. It's unique and it's clever. Well done.

Up she comes!
by sidpixel

Comment by sidpixel:

Originally posted by Imagineer: :: Hello from the Critique Club :: ............................................................ This shot is not as bad as its score indicates. You have interesting subject matter and some lovely motion from the water. But, from what I can gather, the voters would not have liked this for the following reasons: > gloomy lighting which has left colour and contrast quite flat > 'parts' too obvious and unchallenging > composition not engaging enough Improvements would be: > better, brighter lighting > less 'human' viewpoint (eye-level is always a little dull) > getting closer These are simple things to improve so I hope you don't take poor ratings to heart, as this shows promise in my view. Cheers Jon

Many thanks Jon,
I greatly appreciate your very constructive comments, all of which I agree with. This is the first critique I have received but it was well worth waiting for!. It is also made me feel better because this is the first entry that didn't even merit one comment from anybody!
Do you think I may have done better with the one I originally intended?
Hmmm! I was going to attach my original image but it asks for a URL as opposed to my disk address. For my future reference and out of interest of your opinion, could you advise how I do that?

Teacher's pet?
by sidpixel

Comment by cpurser:
Now THAT is creative. Good job.

The web?
by sidpixel

Comment by arngrimur:
Yes my friend this is the internet and it is very useful ;-).
Very good title and a good composition, I love the space in this photograph.

Up she comes!
by sidpixel

Comment by Imagineer:
:: Hello from the Critique Club ::
............................................................

This shot is not as bad as its score indicates. You have interesting subject matter and some lovely motion from the water. But, from what I can gather, the voters would not have liked this for the following reasons:
> gloomy lighting which has left colour and contrast quite flat
> 'parts' too obvious and unchallenging
> composition not engaging enough

Improvements would be:
> better, brighter lighting
> less 'human' viewpoint (eye-level is always a little dull)
> getting closer

These are simple things to improve so I hope you don't take poor ratings to heart, as this shows promise in my view.

Cheers
Jon

The web?
by sidpixel

Comment by sibeling:
This is one of my favorites! Great composition, nice color and silhouettes

The web?
by sidpixel

Comment by carlosmfernandes:
beautiful light and composition

The web?
by sidpixel

Comment by rennie:
What do we need it's the spiderman on the roof of the building. Nice association :) It realy does resemble a web. I wish there was more light. 7.

The web?
by sidpixel

Comment by prozac:
cool...

The web?
by sidpixel

Comment by kiwinick:
I see it as well good idea