THE FAN CLUB
by kiwinick

Comment by md8speed:
I would have gone with a tighter crop on this one

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Comment by Evaan:
Light is pretty flat, and the diagonal line cutting the picture in two is a distraction. But, I like your idea and I like how you cropped it.

Forgotten Dreams (built Circa 1920)
by kiwinick

Comment by Melethia:
Very nice sky as a backdrop - adds to the mood of the picture.

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Comment by dahkota:
Hurts doesn't it! I see no TACKS in this image! ;) Focus and color are good. Image slightly boring but effective use of tacks. and there are more than 1! 6 from me!

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Comment by metoecus:
I feel like I'm missing something here. What significance do the non-highlighted lines have?

Forgotten Dreams (built Circa 1920)
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Comment by bcoble:
Nice colors

Forgotten Dreams (built Circa 1920)
by kiwinick

Comment by andri:
Nice house. What I don't like about this picture and few hundreds of other photographs in this challenge is that this is 'just' a photograph of a house and there doesn't seem to much value added by the photographer.
One thing I would probably have tried here would to be to close to the building and shoot it straight on and show the the texture of the walls, those nice windows and the bushes in front of it. (The rightmost window seems particularly interesting.)
Another possibility would have been to wait for nicer weather and go back for a reshoot with some blue sky and clouds and perhaps take a vertical photograph showing the sky.
I'd also have tried to move a bit back and try to show the house in it's surroundings and keeping the house to the left or the right part of the frame instead of having it dead-center.
Including some foreground in the picture might also have helped it.Perhaps there was a sign here or a fence or a nice rock on the ground and if not, one could at least go lower and include more of the grass.

Forgotten Dreams (built Circa 1920)
by kiwinick

Comment by ReallyColorBlind:
Too centered. I like the tone though.

Forgotten Dreams (built Circa 1920)
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Comment by woohoopepper:
Great color, nice and gloomy sky. Texture - excellent. 9

Forgotten Dreams (built Circa 1920)
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Comment by love:
this one stands out from the crowd..nice color and sky (little spot on the upper right side drops it a point) 9