ITCH !!! Whats a Super Model to DO??by
kiwinickComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Per your request, here is your in depth critique from the Critique Club. :)
The first thing that comes to mind from viewing your collection of images in your portfolio and this image is that this was a last minute, quick shot. Since you have provided no Photographer's Comments or any photograph information, my critique can only be based solely on personal opinion since I have no clue what you were trying for here. For the Critique Club to be more detailed in their jobs, when requesting a critique, it would be most helpful to include these sections for a more detailed critique of your image.
The lighting looks very flat and dull in this image, which is something I do NOT see in your other images. Your other images appear well lit, for example, your fashion entry titled
Beautiful in basic black There you have a clean, background (although not completely even) and here the background is dull grey. There are no catchlights in her eyes at all making her stare seem blank and dark as well.
Focus and clarity appear good. Nice detail in the dress and skin.
The pose isn't what I'd expect in a Studio portrait, it seems more candidish.
I think the composition might benefit in my opinion from a little negative space on the left of the photo. She seems almost squished within the frame of the photo.
She's an adorable model for sure...get some extra lighting on that girl and take LOTS of photos of her. What a cutie.
~Heather~
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