Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by bspurgeon:
not bad. Dust on the background should be cloned out

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by glad2badad:
Hi. I really want to say something constructive here... :-)

I can understand the allure of using dominoes as the subject as they fit the B/W theme and can be easily positioned.

What's hurting this is the presentation is very static and there's no sizzle in the POV. The lighting is also quite harsh resulting in heavy shadows. Maybe something from a lower angle, a longer background to work with, and some softer/reflected lighting?

Just some thoughts...and JMO of course. :-) Good luck in the challenge.

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by epescala:
It needs to be more sharp and more contrast. Could have been a great shot.

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by nlghttrain:
nice idea, but lightibg needs work

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by doeboy18:
black background would have i think mad this nicer? i dont know

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by juliedancer116:
Your picture is nice and sharp. The shadows created by the flash are a bit harsh though.

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by Thai:
great idea, shadows are a bit distracting, good luck

Pride Before A Fall
by SteveJ

Comment by LadyK:
8

Run Him Out Of Town!
by SteveJ

Comment by Melethia:
I'm guessing that based on the comments, the voters didn't see this as panning. Tough challenge, tough crowd! I think it's well titled - really does look the one is chasing the other one out of its territory.

Run Him Out Of Town!
by SteveJ

Comment by Alexgio:
Nice title LOL, Great photo Also