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Comment by tommyd65:
The brush seems a little soft in terms of focus. I like the DOF though.

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Comment by 2Shay:
Beginning of a work of art. I like the concept. I think the bottle are a bit too out of focus. Maybe a more flowing stroke of paint on the canvas would have been nice as well.

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Comment by lindaruthe:
out of focus

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Comment by Catherine_B:
This idea has potential, but the execution is poor. The paint should be in focus and it should be clearer that this is the beginning of a craft or other work of art.

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Comment by Lately:
Interesting use of simple materials!

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Comment by nati_in_here:
I dont think an artist will have the paints on top of their work.

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Comment by Matthew:
wioth some yellow you would have had a primary colours stock photo... nice idea, well composed (I like the negative space). Maybe slightly over exposed and the red is not as intense as it seems that it should be (maybe something you could play with in PS under hues and saturation). Looks like you might have increased the saturation until some detail lost, when altering the hue very slightly would have given a better result.

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Comment by nikuser:
I think a greater DOF to get the bottles in sharper focus as well would improve it. Just my opinion. Nice use of colours nevertheless.

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Comment by scuds:
One of the few tastefull images on this challenge! great job! 8

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Comment by neophyte:
Needs more DOF Nice comp!