Round Midnightby
riotComment by gjumi: Compositionally, this photo is great, because the centered composition follows naturally. I don´t like that it isn´t monochrome, a simple play with light, instead having the colors of human skin opposing the white of the music sheet. A small detail, but not such a big deal would be asking your model to remove the ring. All these, small observations from the technical point.
Regarding the story, this photo is confusing to me, because it´s periphery is so smooth and pleasant (lovely hands and music sheet), but then at the center is this big dark noisy O, punching my face. I don´t understand the title either: it might work as Jazz, or whatever, but this photo doesn´t say Round midnight to me, despite the association of the sax´s O with the clock.
Still, a very good photo, which, if black and white, I could see hanging on the walls of some jazz bar.
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