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by prodigal havoc

Comment by LanSnake:
Very nice use of black and white. I especially like the even gray of the grass. The bars immediately behind the swing bother me a little bit. I might try reframing the seat/chains to see if a composition is possible that does not include these background bars.

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by prodigal havoc

Comment by artemis8:
very gray. lacks contrast

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing5,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by HBunch:
I wonder how many people are judging the drawings rather than the photos. This was taken at a very nice angle, but really looks like not much more than a photo of a drawing. Good drawings though, but I don't think we are suposed to judge the drawings. The lighting was good, but I'm wondering why the fingers turned out red. It's a pretty good photo, don't get me wrong, just lacks the "wow" factor for me. Remember though, that's just an opinion, and you can tell me to sick it up my wazoo if you want. :) Good luck in the challenge.

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by Ricky Cleave:
nice drawings

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by tee tah:
Cute drawing, I would like to see more of the pencil and hand in the photo.

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by mjcecil:
Good DOF. Color is a little bland. Need to make it snap a little more. Overall, good.

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by Kavey:
I'd like to see more of the artist's hand. Nice idea.
Kavey

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by CPattee:
The pencil and your hand are out of focus

Pencil art
by prodigal havoc

Comment by ron:
your artist draws better than me! good job