Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by autool:
There are so many different lines going every which way it becomes confusing. You found an interesting subject and if you had worked with it to straighten up the distracting bars etc, it would have been nice. Is it raining? If so maybe you could have worked that to your advantage. Autool

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by MagsCoyote:
like the long photography 6

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by jimmsp:
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - good
Technical Aspects - quite good
Meets Challenge - sort of. I don't know if it is old, or just broken.
Visual Impact / Originality - good

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by RedRuthann:
Although I don't care for the title (i think the photo stands on it's own - perhaps a one-word title would be better), the photo is great. I like the angle and the lighting. Nice catch of the rain. I particularly like the how the textures are apparent - the slickness from the rain and the rust in the metal. Good work!! 9
Ruthann

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by jmsetzler:
The rain is a nice touch to go along with your title... The background in this particular photo is distracting from the subject. Maybe a different perspective on this subject would make it stand out better against the background... - jmsetzler

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by Journey:
interesting image. Wonder how you got the thin white diagonal lines. Was it raining?

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by bunnies:
is it raining in your photo?

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by lmhr:
I like it. Don't know if its a bit bright though...

Broken childhood memories
by prodigal havoc

Comment by normw:
how on earth did you keep your camera dry??? This is a neat shot. I like that rain in there be because it I am sure led to the swing rusting away

Made in Philippines (It's the American way)
by prodigal havoc

Comment by jimmsp:
Composition - ok
Technical Aspects - ok
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality - ok