Dreamin' of Home
by rayg544

Comment by metoecus:
I think that the placement of the apparition relative to the pole in the background helps to obscure one of the main elements of this photograph. I like the placement of the figure on the left of the frame approaching the sign. There's probably little you could have done about the light on the near side of the building, but having that turned off or covered up for even half of the exposure would have helped to even out the light. I like the feel of the tracks and the roof line receding into the distance. The composition may have been stronger if taken at an angle which emphasized the track a bit more (e.g taken from a bit farther back and turned slightly more toward the vanishing point) and showed the figure walking away from the camera toward the distant horizon.

Dreamin' of Home
by rayg544

Comment by charliebaker:
Great idea and execution on that idea. Man is a little too faded.

Architecture Under the Stars
by rayg544

Comment by Kylie:
I love the ethereal feel you gave this image. Haunting and beautiful.

Architecture Under the Stars
by rayg544

Comment by cwalmye:
You've got some hot pixles there man, might wanna try to use some noise reduction or something. Still an 8 by me, well composed shot, plus nice lighting.

Dreamin' of Home
by rayg544

Comment by puzzled:
I like the idea here, but I wish the ghost person could've been standing either to the left or to the right of the support on the train shelter. Nice and sharp otherwise, with good placement of all the elements (except for the guy). Fits the challenge very well.

Dreamin' of Home
by rayg544

Comment by ClickNSee:
Waiting for the "Last Train to Clarksville", huh? Sorry, couldn't resist. Cool image. Great lighting, and nice textures throughout. <7>

Dreamin'
by rayg544

Comment by Xilebo:
Not very well framed, although the lighting is good

Dreamin'
by rayg544

Comment by blad:
The shot I used is like this except with people power--- good colors and exceptional sharpness

Architecture Under the Stars
by rayg544

Comment by buzzmom:
this photo touches on one of my favorite things to photograph and you have done it quite well. the only thing i can comment on here is that the different buildings on the outside edges might have been taken out to give a more fluid feel

Dreamin'
by rayg544

Comment by ergo:
great inside view. the reflection on the right side is distracting, given the nicely reflective elements of the chromed bikes. A polarizer could have taken care of the glass reflections, imho, and yield a more effective image, and a closer crop to just one or just a few bikes would also be more positive for the composition, imho.