Wagon 1 from David Smith
by clictacamera

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Score 1 from me. ;-) Kidding. You should've called it "Wagon 10" though. ;-)
Photographically - it's got lots of problems (for me). Lighting reflection, angle, focus, tabletop, cropping - all wrong for my taste. Biggest issue though is What the heck am I looking at?? :-) Sorry. I can think of some funnier titles for you though: "The first atomic bomb is transported to the Enola Gay" or "A truck delivering the worlds largest black olive, passes under the city limits sign." ...I'll keep working on it. ;-)

seven for luck
by clictacamera

Comment by hyperfocal:
The borders distracts from an otherwise interesting image. Good Work.

Wagon 1 from David Smith
by clictacamera

Comment by Neil:
Looks low tech; not sure what it is--art work? I suggest in the future when shooting something like this you try moving it away from the background. Also, the photo looks like it could be leveled (blacks/whites adjusted) and focused better.

Wagon 1 from David Smith
by clictacamera

Comment by NRRon:
Too sophisticated for low tech. I also think you cropped too tightly.

seven for luck
by clictacamera

Comment by KDO:
Oh, there it is. I missed the gloved hand for a minute. Interesting photo. It is fascinating how different hands can look. The composition is a bit messy or unbalanced, but you would have to play around with it to see what would be better. Fun idea.

seven for luck
by clictacamera

Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Not sure what I'm counting to get to seven. Flow of the lights and darks leads my eye around nicely. Darks are a bit too dark on my monitor. If you're using photoshop, you might want to use Shadow/Highlight to bring up the darks or levels to make them go away entirely. The eneven half border left and right is a pretty major distraction. Suggest losing the white border entirely. All just my opinion.

seven for luck
by clictacamera

Comment by outland:
I like the one gloved hand and one uncrossed finger. Nice colors.

seven for luck
by clictacamera

Comment by peete:
border is just odd. only white on the sides, and one side bigger than the other...

Wagon 1 from David Smith
by clictacamera

Comment by snackwells:
This image has a certain unprocessed, raw, and edgy look to it. Intentional? I think it works, give the theme.

seven for luck
by clictacamera

Comment by snackwells:
Okay, I think this one looks rather unprocessed. Crop off the dead spaces in the periphery and adjust the shadows to bring out more detail and increase the sharpness.