Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by UNCLEBRO:
I'm afraid it's slightly blurry, but I really like the idea of writing "chocolate" on paper ;-)

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by Bassie:
You were really trying for a ribbon for this challenge! You might just get the ribbon to match the colour of your picture. Extra points for correct spelling.

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by shangri_La_gypsy:
focus is off and the framing could have been thought about a little more

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by dacrazyrn:
Ummmmm...besides very boring, it is OOF, the WB balance needs to be adjusted, it appears a very muddy coloring to it. The composition is somewhat lacking. For this a suggestion...back away from it some and try another angle...and some chocolate. (C:

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by LoudDog:
At least you spelled it right. Next time try to get it in focus and create an interesting composition.

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by vadvirag:
Sorry to say that, but this isn't really the type of photo I expected for the challenge. Catching scripts is the wrong way, try to capture a REAL chocolate instead, no matter if it's a bad composition or so, you would get comments to improve your skills if they see you take the effort. (1 - but I hope to see good photos from you)

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by Node:
MMmm out of focus, tilted and not very interesting shot! Sorry but it dosen't do anything for me.

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by ilovepinkplaydoh:
out of focus

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by goodhart:
Little creativity with this... poor lighting.

Chocolate a la papier
by greenmatt

Comment by garlic:
Not very original, technically badly performed and uninteresting. I´m not trying to hurt you and I´m sorry if I do but I think you should not spend my time and others bye submitting such images.