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Comment by Photodan:
Very pretty, I would like more whites...

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Comment by Jeileen:
A bit too dark. I think if it was not soo dark the shadows would be very effective. Also, the horizontal placement of subject is probably not the most interesting composition!! But, good idea.

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Comment by Neil:
I like the dark tones and the negative space at the bottom. I am less sure of the crop you chose at the right. Personally, I think the head would have been good here, or at least the neck. More significantly however, the subject has lines from their clothes that are distracting to the tones and texture of the skin. Your model needs to avoid tight fitting underwear the day of the shoot.

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Comment by CraigD:
I like the total look, I would suggest that you have your model get undressed a bit before the shoot, to allow for underwear lines to dissapear.

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Comment by gruvin:
Good shade and framing. Butit's just way to dark for me. Not sure I understand the title either (but that doesn't really count.) If lightened, yo might need to reduce contrast slightly to keep the far leg in the "gray zone". Did you have your computer screen turned up high brightness in low light perhaps? it's so easy to do with black and white images. What a shame. 6.

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Comment by Logarithim:
Nice

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Comment by cwalmye:
Not too much of the grayscale. Too dark on the grayscale. The braline also takes away from the image as a whole.

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Comment by tyrkinn:
A bit dark, took me a few seconds and viewing the screen from many postitions before I found out what it is. Still can't figure the whole frame out.

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Comment by ruffian:
Should have waited a little to let the strap marks go away.

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Comment by JCDean:
very dark, i cant quite tell what it is