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Comment by Karalew:
This photo is to dark for me to make out what is going on in the photo.

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Comment by puttytat:
suducess me

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Comment by cpurser:
Maybe a little too dark, and she has bra lines on her skin. Great pose and composition though.

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Comment by LalliSig:
It´s just way too dark for my taste, 90% of the image is pretty much pitch black and only a small fraction of herright legis lit. If you are making it dark to not put anything on display you should perhaps tried a technique callend "painting with light" to give you more control over what parts are dark and what parts are bright. If you are unfamiliar with this technique, send me PM after the challenge is over and I will gladly assist you.

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Comment by speedylix:
Very intriguing photo and well composed. It took me a whil 'till I figured that the center part isn't a shadow but a towel (very nicely done). The only thing that bugs me are the stripes from underware, if shot only 5min later this would have been perfect...

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Comment by Jaycee0521:
its just too dark.

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Comment by outland:
It may be my eye but the reletively narrow range of values doesn't seem intentional.

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Comment by Gatorguy:
Compostionally, It's too centered vertically for my tastes. Technically, the bra line is a distraction.

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Comment by Dr.Confuser:
I just recalibrated my monitor to see if that was the culprit. Nope. This is too dark fro me to see anything but three amorphous shapes. Fine abstract though.

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Comment by Hot Karl:
This would be much more effective if there was a greater sense of black and white, rather than black and not so black, but nice idea.