alone
by brunas

Comment by debitipton:
More focus?

emergency
by brunas

Comment by JJacobson:
I like the idea. I'd feel more hopeful if the mirror was in focus, and the ambulance was moving. Also, the guy walking away from the truck looks really depressed. I'm concerned. Did someone die? I'm not feeling very hopeful any more. Still, this is one of the better one's I've seen so far.

cafe
by brunas

Comment by Skip:
thanks for not shooting this dead on...

cafe
by brunas

Comment by Sammie:
Very nicely done. The colors really stand out.

alone
by brunas

Comment by smokeditor:
very expressive pose. Not too sure about the downward angle.

alone
by brunas

Comment by kadac00:
A little blurry and over exposed, but the composition has alot of potential

alone
by brunas

Comment by graphicfunk:
returning for comments.
Very charming and very well posed. I would have prefered a tad more definition on top of the models shoulders. Here the backlight competes with the front light. Outside of this, this remains a very good study.

alone
by brunas

Comment by frisca:
i think that the lighting coming from behind her shoulders is too much as it washes out the shoulders, which interferes with the emotion of the image. Otherwise I like the bw work in the high(er) key area.

alone
by brunas

Comment by jonpink:
very badly focused - not sure if that was intended or not, if it was I don't really see the need for it. A bit too high-key for the subject here. I would expect it to be darker for a photo entitled alone.

The floor was a bad choice, it's pure white at the back and dark at the front with no real detail.

I would suggest a reshoot that involved a better location like an old hut or crouched against the bottom of a wall / chair as in real life. Having her floating nowhere is a bit odd.

The pose and model are great though -as is the message.

alone
by brunas

Comment by d14:
I really like this photo. Nice feel to it. Gets my high vote of 10. Good luck.