One is the end?
by mrwaffles989

Comment by mrwaffles989:
thatnks for all ur comments. I resized it too small and didnt do enough time thinking about it

Hershey Happines!!!
by mrwaffles989

Comment by jpochard:
I should have taken out stock in Hershey for this challenge! :) Fun idea, but I would have preferred to see it done in a more artistic or creative way. The composition could be improved, I think, but at least including all of the smileys (bottom ones are cut off), and I think the lighting here is very uneven and un appealing for the chocolate. It appears to me that there's an overall purplish cast to the photo

Hershey Happines!!!
by mrwaffles989

Comment by hannafate:
A bold graphic image like this needs even lighting. The darkness at the bottom spoils the "happy" idea.

Hershey Happines!!!
by mrwaffles989

Comment by the_Seeker:
I think it needs better lighting? Kind of harsh in the center and the shadowfrom the wrapper is distracting. Also feel that the smilies could have been framed better.

Hershey Happines!!!
by mrwaffles989

Comment by admart01:
Funny title and idea. I'd like to see all 4 smiles in the frame. A more even light would take away the hot spot from the wrapper and even out the colors on the background.

Hershey Happines!!!
by mrwaffles989

Comment by justine:
Glare on the shiny wrapper. Hard to control I know but the light is also uneven. Cute drawings.

One is the end?
by mrwaffles989

Comment by Imagineer:
Image suffers serious white balance problems. Faded look could be a number of things, but pointing your camera at a mid grey would help get the balance right when focusing. Lots of artifacts too. Not bad DOF though, so some strong lighting and contrast would help next time.

One is the end?
by mrwaffles989

Comment by gaurawa:
The idea look ok, but focus ? clarity ?

One is the end?
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Comment by tfaust:
Bad lighting and there are what appears to be jpeg artifacts.

One is the end?
by mrwaffles989

Comment by DModel21:
poor quality