if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by rcrawford:
As an Intel Employee I gotta love this one! rcrawford

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by Antithesis:
Nice picture, but I think you took it a step too far by saying, "If I were..." whatever sort of thing. This is supposed to be about YOUR part of the world.

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by KarenB:
Initial=hmmm.
Composition=okay
Clarity (focus, details)=fairly good detail, but the choice of DOF hampers some of this
Exposure=I think this could use a bit more DOF
Interesting or Emotive=mildly interesting.

I am using a this new detailed commenting method inspired by autool. (Thanks
autool!). I hope you find it more helpful than my former comments.
Thanks for submitting, and good luck! ;0)
kpb

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by greenem2:
...but you're not

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by chariot:
Look at your DOF. What area is in focus? Now tell me what is in that area that is interesting.

Nonetheless it is a clever take on the challenge.

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by paganini:
if you were an electron, you would submit a photo of an electrical charge, something that shows the actual activity instead of a boring motherboard which is out of focus on both ends and nothing really interesting to draw my eyes to.

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by sjgleah:
Lots of nice green. I like that... However, there's nothing here that really grabs me. 5 sjgleah

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by snie:
Too narrowly focussed.

if I were an electron...
by wenyao

Comment by jmsetzler:
Interesting photo... the tie-in to the challenge, IMO, is not as strong as it could be. I would love to see more evenly distributed lighting and focus on this image... - jmsetzler