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Moonlit Night
07/30/2004 05:00:28 AM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by 3DsArcher:
Great title
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Simple Elegance
07/30/2004 01:34:32 AM
Simple Elegance
by bmatt17

Comment by bmatt17:
Originally posted by Imagineer:

Hello from the Critique Club!
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When viewing challenge images I like to see shots which work outside of the competition - normally a sign that it's a good shot regardless of votes. This probably suffers in that respect, mainly due to the skewed arrangement, blue colour cast and rather centred composition. The set-up clearly shows balance but it doesn't engage the viewer much beyond this, which ultimately is what may win votes.

I would ask; why the colour treatment and why the background? If it's difficult to answer then it's probably what many voters were wondering too. I would have chosen pure white or even a very dark colour and shot it from lower down, avoiding the shadows on the background too. This would demonstrate the balance element more dramatically. Since you can't easily hide the fact that the fork was tucked under the spoon, it could have looked more impressive edge-on (90 degrees).

Cheers
Jon


Thanks for the Critique Jon. The reason I chose the background and the color, was because it covered up the crummy setup I had. I wanted a pure white background, but didn't have what I needed at the time. You're suggestion of a dark brackground and angle I could've done and I think it would have improved the shot a lot. Thanks again.
Moonlit Night
07/29/2004 09:48:37 PM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by soccerdad:
Very clever, and a decent shot (though a little sharper might get an extra point.) -7
Photographer found comment helpful.
Moonlit Night
07/29/2004 08:38:33 PM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by thomasheany:
I don't know what you were trying to achieve but I do have a feeling that it didn't really work.
Moonlit Night
07/29/2004 04:31:13 PM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by skylen:
This is quite neat. I wonder how it's done?
Photographer found comment helpful.
Simple Elegance
07/29/2004 03:35:31 PM
Simple Elegance
by bmatt17

Comment by Imagineer:
Hello from the Critique Club!
......................................................

When viewing challenge images I like to see shots which work outside of the competition - normally a sign that it's a good shot regardless of votes. This probably suffers in that respect, mainly due to the skewed arrangement, blue colour cast and rather centred composition. The set-up clearly shows balance but it doesn't engage the viewer much beyond this, which ultimately is what may win votes.

I would ask; why the colour treatment and why the background? If it's difficult to answer then it's probably what many voters were wondering too. I would have chosen pure white or even a very dark colour and shot it from lower down, avoiding the shadows on the background too. This would demonstrate the balance element more dramatically. Since you can't easily hide the fact that the fork was tucked under the spoon, it could have looked more impressive edge-on (90 degrees).

Cheers
Jon
Photographer found comment helpful.
Moonlit Night
07/28/2004 01:56:04 PM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by dwolff:
Creative and original
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Moonlit Night
07/28/2004 11:47:06 AM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by trunki:
Horrible.
Moonlit Night
07/28/2004 09:50:39 AM
Moonlit Night
by bmatt17

Comment by photom:
Nice idea - and excellent title. I like the graphic quality to this.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Back from the Candy Store
07/27/2004 08:13:52 PM
Back from the Candy Store
by bmatt17

Comment by UNCLEBRO:
good idea, but the candy is hard to find amongst all the blue
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