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Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice capture of a nice expression. After conversion to B&W, please revisit your levels. Bumping up the midtone and black levels might help to pull her face out of the background. Also DOF to include the guy might be better for many viewers because there is so much of him.

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Comment by nomad469:
I like this a lot ... although the added "grain" is too regular that knocks it from a 8 to a 7 for me

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Comment by melismatica:
Beautiful, natural expression captured on the woman. You've included enough background to provide the viewer with some contextual clues. I onlly wish the guy's eyes weren't closed.

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Comment by dahkota:
This looks pulled out of an advertisement or movie reel. Composition and POV are perfect. Lighting is excellent. Expressions priceless. Excellent work! 10

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Comment by espy2:
I don't usually like comments or give them, but since candids are near and dear to my heart, I have decided to comment on every photo in this challenge.

Photo is very grainy to me. Good focus and expression on the woman. I like the tones, but probably would have gone more on the sepia side. Just kind of ok for me. No big wow factors felt here from it. A 4 vote from me.

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Comment by Jutilda:
Really nice. I like the rich warm tones with the single guy off centered.

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Comment by Jutilda:
Excellent. Their expressions are truly "caught." 9

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Comment by e301:
i like the moment, the expression, the very strong sense of location and mood; seems a touch forced into the nearly square crop, perhaps.

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Comment by BakerBug:
Amazing shot! One of the best ones in this challenge! Good luck on a ribbon!

Adding to favorites.

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Comment by sher:
nice capture! that's so cool :)