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dahlinComment by kaiser_chief: An interesting image. I find it interesting that you chose to photograph this from slightly behind, looking at the back of the rider, and not from the front, looking at the face and front. This is even more interesting seeing the angle of the sun makes the back very dark.
The crop at the bottom is a slight problem. You have attempted to remove the base the horse is standing on, I am not sure of the reason for this, hawever this crop highlights that the photo is not straight, and the front feet are higher than the rear. You cropped off the very bottom of the rear holves, but the base is visible o the front. The tree around the base I like, even the tree in the corners, but was there a way to not have the tree branch directly behinfd the heads, as I find this distracting.
Also, an interesting contrast, the buildings in the background and the statue of a native.....it does highlight progress, for better or for worse......
Overall presentation, postert layout etc is very good. Text is great as is the title and phrase,. I might have gone with a different text/border colour though.....
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