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by kyebosh

Comment by owen:
I only just noticed the loooong bench. Well done.

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by kyebosh

Comment by msdoubletrouble:
stellar job! good luck 10

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by kyebosh

Comment by Ivo:
Critique Club

Hi Logan. Good shot. You've captured a really nice expression on your subject's face. The shot looks like it is quite natural and has a good feel to it. Now for the analysis. The colors are somehwhat drab and the placement of the subject within the image is not very flattering. I find the drainpipe and the turquise paint between her legs to be distracting. I might suggest sharpening the image and playing around a bit with shadows and highlights. Though the angle is different, it makes your subject appear quite small. Looking through some of your other shots, I'd say that you could do better though it is not really "that bad" but it is really not "that great" either. This is just my opinion. Hope it is somewhat useful.

Ivo

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by kyebosh

Comment by groggyfroggy:
You have a beautiful model. I wish she was in front of a different backgraund. I think you should do ok though. Good luck.

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by kyebosh

Comment by mrsamsa:
great shot

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by kyebosh

Comment by mexico:
Is it my eyes, or is there a bit of a green cast on this picture? The angle seems to make the model appear shorter than she should too, imo.

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by kyebosh

Comment by davmct:
nice title.

Instrumental Abstract
by kyebosh

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

You have done a very pleasant abstract for this Challenge.

I would suggest that, while the two very hot areas in this image are certainly in high contrast to the remainder of the image, they are probably not enough to influence voters to judge it high in this category.

You obviouly had fun with the abstract itself with good colors and just enough in focus to give a foundation. I'd suggest moving that focus point into one of the sweet spots (rule of 3rds) to keep the viewer in the picture to enjoy the color patterns.

It's always fun to experiment with a good lens. I"ll look forward to seeing more of your work.

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by kyebosh

Comment by docurrie:
The background really hurts this image.

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by kyebosh

Comment by JPR:
nice expression. is it just the angle or is she really short?