Fury
by Nitin

Comment by graphicfunk:
The wrath! Bump.

Lahaina Express
by Nitin

Comment by Kathy:
That "No Smoking" sign on the front cracks me up.

Lahaina Express
by Nitin

Comment by 2Shay:
Very colorful train shot. I would have liked to see it cropped a bit less at the top so we could see more smoke. Nice photo.

Life
by Nitin

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club,

First, let me thank you for including the details on the post processing you performed in the photographer's comment section. Now for the critique. My first impression was that the two walkers look like they could be walking in the brisk early morning hours by the way they are bundled up but the lighting looks too even to be just after daybreak. The link to morning becomes weaker when you see the packages in the hands of the walker on the right, as few people on morning walks carry more than a water bottle.

As for the post processing, the blur looks very unnatural, as it starts closer to the front of the image on the left side of the road than it does on the right side of the road. I do like the composition a lot, as the road doesn't just go straight down the middle of the picture and the dead grass on the left side of the road gives a nice secondary subject to look at with lots of detail.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

Message edited by author 2006-10-26 13:59:28.

Lahaina Express
by Nitin

Comment by Melethia:
I like the comic juxtaposition of the no smoking sticker and the very obviously smoking smokestack on the train.

Lahaina Express
by Nitin

Comment by HansonStudios:
I like the no smoking sign on a train that has smoke coming out of the stack. A little detail that makes this shot more unique

Lahaina Express
by Nitin

Comment by dx_power:
nice shot, good going

Lahaina Express
by Nitin

Comment by sfalice:
Dear me, I hope this engine wasn't going anywhere when you took this image. Nice, colorful. Wish that hot spot to the right wasn't there, but we can't have everything.

Life
by Nitin

Comment by jerryc12:
Nice picture but doesn't necessarily say morning.

Life
by Nitin

Comment by bigdipper:
This could be any time of day. An interesting picture though.