Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by Efergoh:
Seems noisy, but I still like the image.

Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by coolblue:
a beautifully constructed image

Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by philup:
Great picture. A little blur but nice.

Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by Judi:
A little noisy but what a character.

Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by shalrath:
What a great face! A couple of things, there seems to be a fair amount of noise and a little lack of sharpness. But otherwise, this is nice.

Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by BobsterLobster:
A distracting red border can't rescue the out of focus face and bad composition. The expression isn't great, and a good candid usually needs a sense of context and story.

Shipmate's View
by jessie

Comment by Citadel:
A little oversharpened which is particularly evident in the beard and the shoulder patch.

In Memory Of...
by jessie

Comment by posthumous:
Greetings from the critique club

Nicely done. You have captured the disappearance into fog very well. I like the alternating benches, and I like how you snagged a tiny recognizable phrase in the corner and made it your title. The photo seems to document how memory disappears.

I gave this a 6. The only reason I didn't score it higher is that this is such a common trope, perspective lines vanishing, and it so often seems to be from this angle and to have this mood.

If you're interested in scoring higher, then I would say not to be this dim and soft. I realize that this picture depends on being dim and soft, but a flaw of DPC voters is that they don't think about what the picture needs. And the problem with DPC is that instead of trying to fix the flaws, it encourages photographers to match those flaws. Don't do it.

In Memory Of...
by jessie

Comment by Simpa:
realy realy great presentation...

In Memory Of...
by jessie

Comment by CapeSail:
Very nice composition.