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Unsharpened Pencilsby webkingComment by melismatica: Hi there from the Critique Club!
This photo has a lot going for it. Simplicity, great high key white background, and nice sharp focus on the subject. It is a good start. I find that the point of view, the centered subject, and the tight cropping combine to cause the subject to appear precarious and in danger of spilling off the edge of the frame. Since you clearly enjoyed the graphic quality of the unsharpened pencil tops, my suggestion is that bundling the pencils together into a tight circle, securing them with a rubber band, and shooting from directly overhead would create an interesting 'circles within a circle' pattern and eliminate the container which doesn't add much to the composition. |
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Potted Strawberriesby webkingComment by kyebosh: BRIGHT, is the first word that pops in my head. Cool little yardworking tools! They go so well with the harvest you have there. 9. |
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| 08/08/2004 04:10:59 PM |
Potted Strawberriesby webkingComment by photom: Your miniature tools are perfect. The image is very well setup and technically well done. Perfect exposure and focus. Composition is a bit centered and I'm not sure the bright yellow background works as well as a very dark or black one would. |
| 08/08/2004 01:16:53 PM |
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